Lying in bed, with the dark and the cold,
Fighting off the dreams passing through my mind
Seeing moon light upon the empty fold.
Remembering time past and days of old,
The passing since, to me, has not been kind;
Lying in bed, with the dark and the cold.
Many things said, many things yet untold,
Small and fleeting thoughts which prove to remind,
Seeing moon light upon the empty fold.
Your companionship valued more than gold,
But now, you are gone, and me, left behind
Lying in bed, with the dark and the cold.
Bitter feelings, in my heart, taking hold,
Yet fond memories become more refined
Seeing moon light upon the empty fold.
My soul filled with a great, yet controlled
Inner aching, foreign and undefined,
Lying in bed, with the dark and the cold,
Seeing moon light upon the empty fold.













Comments
So, this is called a Villanelle?
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"I'm against the self-righteous hateful agendas of mankind." - ~Mavyrk
"So the cause of death was the letter S?" Gil Grissom
"Don't judge a book by its movie." - ~CindarellaPop
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also I like how the middle lines ryhme and the begining and ending of each stanza (correct me if I'm wrong on what a stanza is haha) ryhmes differently
dark poetry = <3
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god gave us hands for a reason, to do what he did, create. that is how he created us in his image. we are the only species that creates just for the sake of creating, hence why we have art.
nú, scolde ic benugan se péo? ic gesceátaþ
Though recently I learned that the meter does not have to be 10, but it does have to be consistent throughout.
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"I'm against the self-righteous hateful agendas of mankind." - ~Mavyrk
"So the cause of death was the letter S?" Gil Grissom
"Don't judge a book by its movie." - ~CindarellaPop
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god gave us hands for a reason, to do what he did, create. that is how he created us in his image. we are the only species that creates just for the sake of creating, hence why we have art.
nú, scolde ic benugan se péo? ic gesceátaþ
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"I'm against the self-righteous hateful agendas of mankind." - ~Mavyrk
"So the cause of death was the letter S?" Gil Grissom
"Don't judge a book by its movie." - ~CindarellaPop
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